Rayamondo's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Boxman [BiPolar]]

Very nice piece of flash!

Firstly id like too say that i personally have had experience with somebody with this disorder and the way you have depicted it worked very well.

Bipolar causes a persons state of mind to completely disintegrate into a state of mania and complete and utter depression and with this flash you have really captured this. The smashing on the head with the metal pipe certainly portrayed this.

I really liked the way you created the voices that were trapped inside the boxmans head. This made the viewer of the flash understand what was going on a whole lto better.

I also liked how the desk moved farther away and the significance of it only being that one person in a room gave off the feeling of unhappiness and loneliness, well done.

There are no major issues with this piece of flash at all. It was a well drawn out, short animation. The only advice i would give too you is that in parts the animation didnt flow aswell. By this i mean that in one scene the man had blood pouring out of his face and in the next scene he wasn't. I'm sorry to pay attention to detail but little things can make a difference in flash movies.

Overall, i wasnt dissapointed, this was a good piece of flash and i enjoyed watching it. =]

[Disguise]

This is very good animation!

First things first, i loved the loading screen, that was very clever and a strangely fun way of killing time =].

...I liked it, This animation was very different from what all of the other authors dish out and it worked well. I loved the amount of detail you put into the landscape, it really set this animation aside from others. The whole concept of the spy sneaking up on the creepy weird looking guy was very good. It added the humour too it aswell as making it look clever how he blended in with the people by literally pulling on a disguise. The sound was clear and i liked the cheeky kind of tone to the music, it deffinately suited then characters in the movie, well done with that.

However, i would like to offer you some CC. Yes the graphics were good and detailed but i thought that the movement wasn't very good. This is something you should improve on and im sure you will.

Peda responds:

Thank you! I love proper reviews, you obviously have a skill.
I understand what you say about the movement, Exam conditions did lead me to cut corners when I was focussing on the art (it was an art exam, I'm glad you liked it). For a better look at movement I reccomend my animations 'Identity' and 'cartoon'.

[littleFoot]

I love your work and your imagination

I think your iamgination is amazing, i havent seen anything more influential and original as this. This really is an amazing piece of flash with no negative points to it at all.

Firstly i thought that the graphics were amazing. So many original little creatures in this piece of flash, it was brilliant too see sometihng original but good. I thought that the use of light effects on the landscape on chracterse was brilliant and that the movement was also very realistic to the shape of the creatures.

Secondly the style was brilliant, ive never sen anything more original than this, you ahve sucha great imagination.

The sound was very good, from the rustling of moving down the trees to the sound of the little yellow, water bottle chicken thing :D it was great!

Violence, Cmon... the little dude knocks the guy out with a rock!

I found the weird bald sasguatch type creature funny, especially when he thought throwing a bit of grass would piss off the bigfoot dude, that was hilarious.

In all, if i could give this an 11 i would, your works inspirational and this isnt the only piece of flash that i love, youre one of my favourite artists, Truly amazing!

[The Child That Smelt Odd]

pmsl!!

Yalright ladsh!, deshpite the obvious safety hazards im going to light up thish shparkler! lmao this movie was brilliant, so so random and funny. I love the voices, reminded me of devvo :D